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«It is generally believed that an artistic talent is exceptional gift of few people. However there is an opinion that most people have hidden artistic talents».

«It is generally believed that an artistic talent is exceptional gift of few people. However there is an opinion that most people have hidden artistic talents». yX76D
It is considered by some there are natural artistic persons, who have been possessed their abilities since childhood. Nevertheless, there is a point of view that many people can reach some goals during the hard working process, meet targets merely developing their hidden talents. However, while I believe that certain individuals have inborn faculty, I agree there are various types of people having diverse, own ways to reveal artistic skills. Firstly, it is believed that the definition of the word «talent» is really complicated to set. The fact is talent is something personal, what comes from the human personality. Secondly, determining artistic talents it is better to verify that there are different ways from where these talents come. With regards to individuals who are exceptionally gifted from an early age, it is not easy to explain the cause of this phenomenon. Scientists strongly believe the reason could be found in genetic field. Some kinds of abilities are due to family roots and heredity. Intrinsically a matter of genes has been scientifically proven. But it does not mean that enhanced people are geniuses from the beginning, they just are more liable to an art practicing. The presence of suitable genes is not enough for having the aptitudes. There is another factor directly influencing the meeting of individual goals. The point is the/our surrounding has a big impact on developing talents. Furthermore the distinctive circumstances could simply affect the acceptability of releasing new artistic gifts. Finally/ additionally the most cases a tight and regular work could be the reason why people become more experienced. Many famous people, such as Goethe or Mozart, were convinced that just 5% of human skills are just a talent, the rest part is individual desire and intention to work. In conclusion, there are different points of view about the artistic talents; each of them deserves a deep research. Although a few of people tend to be more gifted, there is the big percentage of talented people who show a creative fulfilment without certain exceptional gift.
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is considered
by
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some
there are natural
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artistic
persons, who have
been possessed
their abilities since childhood.
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, there is a point of view that
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many
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people
can reach
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some
goals during the
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hard working
process,
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meet
targets
merely
developing their hidden
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talents
.
However
, while I believe that certain
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individuals
have inborn faculty, I
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agree
there are various types of
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people
having diverse,
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own
ways to reveal
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artistic
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skills
.

Firstly
, it
is believed
that the definition of the word
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«talent»
is
really
complicated to set. The fact is
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talent
is something personal, what
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comes
from the human personality.
Secondly
, determining
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artistic
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talents
it is better to verify that there are
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different
ways from where these
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talents
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come
.
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
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individuals
who are
exceptionally
gifted from an early age, it is not easy to
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explain
the cause of this phenomenon. Scientists
strongly
believe the reason could
be found
in genetic field.
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Some
kinds of abilities are due to family roots and heredity.
Intrinsically
a matter of genes has been
scientifically
proven.
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But
it does not mean that enhanced
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people
are geniuses from the beginning, they
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just
are more liable to an art practicing.

The presence of suitable genes is not
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enough
for having the aptitudes. There is another factor
directly
influencing the meeting of
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individual
goals. The point is the/our surrounding has a
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big
impact on developing
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talents
.
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Furthermore
the distinctive circumstances could
simply
affect the acceptability of releasing new
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artistic
gifts.
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Finally
/
additionally
the most cases a tight and regular work could be the reason why
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people
become more experienced.
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Many
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famous
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people
, such as Goethe or Mozart,
were convinced
that
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just
5% of human
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skills
are
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just
a
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talent
, the rest part is
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individual
desire and intention to work.

In conclusion
, there are
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different
points of view about the
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artistic
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talents
; each of them deserves a deep research. Although a few of
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people
tend to be more gifted, there is the
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big
percentage of talented
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people
who
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show
a creative
Possible spelling mistake. 'fulfilment' is British English.
fulfilment
without certain exceptional gift.
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IELTS essay «It is generally believed that an artistic talent is exceptional gift of few people. However there is an opinion that most people have hidden artistic talents».

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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