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describe the changes in the park

describe the changes in the park 9L6qw

The given plans demonstrate how a science park has changed since 2008. Overall, Research and Development area has been added to the north-west of the park, where was grassland in 2008. In 2008, there was a reception next to the office, but it has been removed and a university hub has been structured in its place. The Business Unit has been kept at its original place. The car park, which is located in the center of the park, has been partly demolished. Cyber Security has been expanded drastically to the road in the middle. A bus stop has been added to the eastern side of the park. Also, a train station has been built in the south, which has been linked to the park by a path. IT Centre has been renamed as Innovation Centre. A cycle path has been constructed all around the science park. All in all, the park has significantly developed over time.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 plans demonstrate how a science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 since 2008.

Overall
, Research and Development area has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the north-west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, where was grassland in 2008. In 2008, there was a reception next
 to the office, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has been removed
 and a university hub has been structured
 in its place. The Business Unit has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 at its original place. The car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, which is located
 in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, has been partly demolished. Cyber Security has been expanded
drastically
 to the road in the middle. A bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the eastern side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Also
, a train station has been built
 in the south, which has been linked
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 by a path. IT Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 has been renamed
 as Innovation Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
. A cycle path has been constructed
 all around the science park.

All in all, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has significantly
 developed over time. 