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It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters through the mail or post compared with the twentieth century What factors have led to this situation What will the impact be on the lives of future generations v.3

It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters through the mail or post compared with the twentieth century What factors have led to this situation What will the impact be on the lives of future generations v. 3
A broad agreement of comparison between nowadays and a century before signs that fewer people apply mail system to send letters. This essay then will identifies reasonable causes and estimates effects on later generation relating to this circumstance. Regarding the causes, many people invent a plausible excuse that sending a message through electronic mail offers more considerable benefits than via post office. Firstly, it is widely known that mailing letters through email is faster than that through traditional post. Example can be seen from the fact that postman normally spends more than a day for addressing mail, while in only a brief seconds, e-mail provider can deliver our letters. Furthermore, as technologies are developing, it is often said that e-mail are more available for wider society than mail. This means that sending letters via e-mail is now accessible for people in some remote areas where they often encounter technical difficulty in coming into post office. Turning to the potential impacts, it is expected for later generation that this circumstance will dictate people to relatively lack of handwriting skill if they previously tend to apply e-mail system. This is because person intensively writes a message by handwriting style in order to devote attention in letters, so this skill will decrease as there is no requisite to adopt. Another possible effect is a rise in unemployment numbers, meaning that job opportunities as postman will not be available for the next generation due to postman’s services remaining by no means essential. This happens when fewer people implement mail system, thus post office will be dissolved. Overall, it is possible to conclude that the benefits from e-mail, fast delivery and widespread availability, enhance people to write electronic mail. Consequently, this will address some impacts on coming generation such as lack of handwriting and a rise in unemployment numbers.
A broad agreement of comparison between nowadays and a century
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before
signs that fewer
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people
apply mail system to
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send
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letters
. This essay then will
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identifies
reasonable causes and estimates effects on later generation relating to this circumstance.

Regarding the causes,
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many
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people
invent a plausible excuse that sending a message through electronic mail offers more considerable benefits than via
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post
office.
Firstly
, it is
widely
known that mailing
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letters
through email is faster than that through traditional
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post
. Example can be
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seen
from the fact that postman
normally
spends more than a day for addressing mail, while in
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only
a brief seconds, e-mail provider can deliver our
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letters
.
Furthermore
, as technologies are developing, it is
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often
said that e-mail are more available for wider society than mail. This means that sending
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letters
via e-mail is
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now
accessible for
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people
in
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some
remote areas where they
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often
encounter technical difficulty in coming into
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post
office.

Turning to the potential impacts, it is
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expected
for later generation that this circumstance will dictate
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people
to
relatively
lack of handwriting
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skill
if they previously tend to apply e-mail system. This is
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because
person
intensively
writes a message by handwriting style in order to devote attention in
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letters
,
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so
this
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skill
will decrease as there is no requisite to adopt. Another possible effect is a rise in unemployment numbers, meaning that job opportunities as postman will not be available for the
next
generation due to postman’s services remaining by no means essential. This happens when fewer
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people
implement mail system,
thus
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post
office will
be dissolved
.

Overall
, it is possible
to conclude
that the benefits from e-mail,
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fast
delivery and widespread availability, enhance
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people
to write electronic mail.
Consequently
, this will address
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some
impacts on coming generation such as lack of handwriting and a rise in unemployment numbers.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters through the mail or post compared with the twentieth century What factors have led to this situation What will the impact be on the lives of future generations v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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