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It is cruel to testing medical drugs on wild animals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is cruel to testing medical drugs on wild animals. jo8Dy
In the rapidly changing world the role of medicine is increasing significantly. the argument that medical tablets is a question that has still reminded of great debates. It is disagreed that it is vicious to trail medicines on animals. This will be shown by analyzing that it will be a good opportunity to examine new chemical drugs from diseases and medical stuff are able to increase their knowledge by the help of testing drugs on wild animals. Initially, testing new vaccine on animals provides positive chance to cure incurable diseases. For instance, in the research of scientists of the WHO mentioned that, vaccines tested on rats, bats, and several animals in 2020 to find a cure for COVID 19 disease. Because the body of some animals is similar to that of humans. Therefore, the idea of examining medicine on animals can be supported. Moreover, medical scientists are able to develop their skills and qualification by testing their researches on wild animals. For example, in European Universities students of natural faculty can do their biological or chemical researchers works with animals. Learning something in reality is more effective than learning theory. thus it will be great opportunity for doctors or chemists to test medical drugs on wild animals in order progressing their knowledge.
In the
rapidly
changing world the role of medicine is increasing
significantly
.
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the
argument that
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medical
tablets is a question that has
still
reminded of great debates. It
is disagreed
that it is vicious to trail medicines on
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animals
. This will
be shown
by analyzing that it will be a
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good
opportunity to examine new chemical drugs from diseases and
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medical
stuff are able to increase their knowledge by the
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help
of testing drugs on wild
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animals
.
Initially
, testing new vaccine on
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animals
provides
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positive
chance to cure incurable diseases.
For instance
, in the research of scientists of the WHO mentioned that, vaccines
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tested
on rats, bats, and several
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animals
in 2020 to find a cure for
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID 19
disease.
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Because
the body of
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some
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animals
is similar to that of humans.
Therefore
, the
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idea
of examining medicine on
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animals
can
be supported
.
Moreover
,
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medical
scientists are able to develop their
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skills
and qualification by testing their researches on wild
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
.
For example
, in European Universities students of natural faculty can do their biological or chemical researchers works with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
. Learning something in reality is more effective than learning theory.
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thus
it will be great opportunity for doctors or chemists to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
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medical
drugs on wild
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animals
in order progressing their knowledge.
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IELTS essay It is cruel to testing medical drugs on wild animals.

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