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Keeping wild animals in zoo is cruel. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's developing world the life of wild animals is a matter of great concern among population. the growing of modernization is having a negative influence on wild animals. it is agreed with the argument that caring of wild animals in zoo is vicious. this will be shown by analyzing the animals lose their hunting instincts and the cages or barriers prevent their habitation. Initially animals kept in cages would not be able to hunt for their own needs. For example, in 1966 the first Safari Park was built in England in order to observe rare wild animals which listed in the RED BOOK. In this park animals live, hunt and walk as if they were living in a forest Thus the idea that, keeping wild animals in zoo cannot be supported. Moreover, the zoos limit the independence of wild animals. For instance zoologists argue that the wild animals should be free and in the cage they always be under control by animal keepers. it should be noted that animals need a free lifestyle to reproduce. Therefore, it will provide the protection of wild animals living in forests, savannas or where they need to live. To conclude, saving wild animals in the zoo is limit their abilities and cages are uncomfortable for animals to live. therefore, the idea that it is inhuman to care of wild animals in the zoo has a strong support. It is predicted that this notion will solve in the foreseeable future.
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today
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animals
is a matter of great concern among population.
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the
growing of modernization is having a
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negative
influence on wild
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animals
.
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agreed
with the argument that caring of wild
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animals
in zoo is vicious.
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will
be shown
by analyzing the
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animals
lose their hunting instincts and the
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cages
or barriers
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prevent
their habitation.
Initially
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animals
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kept
in
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cages
would not be able to hunt for their
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own
needs.
For example
, in 1966 the
first
Safari Park
was built
in England in order to observe rare wild
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animals
which listed in the RED BOOK. In this park
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animals
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live
, hunt and walk as if they were living in a forest
Thus
the
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idea
that, keeping wild
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animals
in zoo cannot
be supported
.
Moreover
, the zoos limit the independence of wild
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animals
.
For instance
zoologists argue that the wild
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animals
should be free and in the
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cage
they
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always be
under control by
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animal
keepers.
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it
should
be noted
that
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animals
need a free lifestyle to reproduce.
Therefore
, it will provide the protection of wild
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animals
living in forests, savannas or where they need to
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live
.
To conclude
, saving wild
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animals
in the zoo is limit their abilities and
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cages
are uncomfortable for
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animals
to
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live
.
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therefore
, the
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idea
that it is inhuman to care of wild
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animals
in the zoo has a strong support. It
is predicted
that this notion will solve in the foreseeable future.
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IELTS essay Keeping wild animals in zoo is cruel.

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