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Culture and habits for people around the world

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I am very found of discover, experience and learn about new cultures. It is very enriching. But I don't have much contact with other cultures because is very expensive travel to another country. However I visited Canada 2 years ago and there I was exposed to a different and new culture. canadians have different habits from brazilians, they are very polited while brazilians are not, for example canadians always say: good morning, good afternoon to anyone and anywhere and brazilians dont do that. Other interesting habit that surprise me is that canadians take of their shoes before to get in a house
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IELTS essay Culture and habits for people around the world

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
101 words
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