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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. W5ADD
Today, world is progressing and with the world, we have to make progress and succeed by working with determination and diligently. However, working in the team will not help because people will always criticize your idea and work. So I completely disagree with the statement that working with team is way to succeed as compared to when you work individually. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay. Firstly, When you are working alone you can fully focus and can put your creative ideas forward without any argument and criticism. For Example, Last year I was working on the project with my colleagues, which was about medicines and we have to come up with a advertise that should be appealing to audience. We spent days and days but instead of listening to each other ideas, we were fighting and arguing because everyone wants to take credit and soon we met deadline and there was nothing to present to our boss and it was embarrassing. So our boss came with the idea that there will be no team and we will work individually and come up with the ideas. By the end of the day, we all have five to ten ideas related to project. Sometime working alone can be advantage as no one will disapprove your thoughts and argue and you can completely present your ideas freely. Secondly. Working alone can boost your confidence infinitely and can make you more passionate and focus about your work. For instance, last week, my boss gave me assignment and I have to present that in front of whole office. I was terrified because I always gets nervous in front of people and also I had a really bad experience in the past. So I talk to her and she helped with my issue and made me practiced in few people as it will help to build my confidence. Moreover. when I gave the presentation, everyone applauded. It was a great day for me as it gave me great confidence to work alone. In my conclusion, I would add that working individually is real game-changer as it will boost your confidence and will make you more hard working towards your work.
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with determination and
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,
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working
in the team will not
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help
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people
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.
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So
I completely disagree with the statement that
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working
with team is way to succeed as compared to when you
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work
individually
. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

Firstly
, When you are
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working
alone you can
fully
focus and can put your creative
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ideas
forward without any argument and criticism.
For Example
, Last year I was
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working
on the project with my colleagues, which was about
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medicines and
we
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have to
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come
up with
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a
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advertise
that should be appealing to audience. We spent days and days
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instead
of listening to each other
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ideas
, we were fighting and arguing
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because
everyone wants to take credit and
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soon
we met deadline and there was nothing to present to our boss and it was embarrassing.
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So
our boss came with the
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idea
that there will be no
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team and
we will
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work
individually
and
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come
up with the
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ideas
. By the
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end
of the day, we all have five to ten
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ideas
related to project. Sometime
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working
alone can be advantage as no one will disapprove your thoughts and argue and you can completely present your
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ideas
freely
.

Secondly
.
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Working
alone can boost your
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confidence
infinitely
and can
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make
you more passionate and focus about your
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work
.
For instance
, last week, my boss gave me assignment and I
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have to
present that in front of whole office. I
was terrified
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because
I always
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gets
nervous in front of
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people
and
also
I had a
really
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bad
experience in the past.
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So
I talk to
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her and
she
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helped
with my issue and made me practiced in few
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people
as it will
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help
to build my
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confidence
.
Moreover
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when
I gave the presentation, everyone applauded. It was a great day for me as it gave me great
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confidence
to
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work
alone.

In my conclusion, I would
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add
that
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working
individually
is real game-changer as it will boost your
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confidence
and will
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make
you more
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towards your
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IELTS essay It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
374 words
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