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the picture shows the lifife cycle of the cockroach

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The given picture illustrates the life cycle of an insect called cockroach. In general, the life cycle lasts two years and the process contains a series of stages in a life cycle of the cockroach, but involves eight main steps which begins when the female adult cockroach lays the egg sack and finishes with the adult cockroach. In the first stage of the process, the cockroach begins life as the egg sack or called ootecae. After that, the egg sack hatches into the newborn nymph which is covered with a white outer shell and grows the legs. Subsequently, the newborn nymph undergoes the molting process and becomes the early-stage nymph. At this stage, the outer shell changes the color and the legs are longer. After a period of time, the early-stage nymph experiences four molting processes and grows to adult size. And the last stage of the process is that the end stage nymph becomes the adult cockroach which is ready to fly. The life cycle is now complete and it will begin all over again.
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picture illustrates the
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cycle
of an insect called cockroach.

In general
, the
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life
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cycle
lasts two years and the
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process
contains a series of
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stages
in a
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life
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cycle
of the
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cockroach
,
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involves eight main steps which
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begins
when the female adult
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cockroach
lays the egg sack and finishes with the adult cockroach.

In the
first
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stage
of the
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process
, the
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cockroach
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begins
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life
as the egg sack or called
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ootecae
. After that, the egg sack hatches into the newborn nymph which
is covered
with a white outer shell and grows the legs.
Subsequently
, the newborn nymph undergoes the molting
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process
and becomes the early-stage nymph. At this
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stage
, the outer shell
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changes
the color and the legs are longer.

After a period of time, the early-stage nymph experiences four molting
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processes
and grows to adult size. And the last
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stage
of the
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process
is that the
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end
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nymph becomes the adult
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cockroach
which is ready to
fly
. The
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life
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cycle
is
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now
complete and it will
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all over again.
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IELTS essay the picture shows the lifife cycle of the cockroach

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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