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the below picture shows the life cycle of butterfly

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The given picture illustrates the life cycle of the butterfly. In general, the process contains a series of stages in a life cycle of the butterfly, but involves five main steps which begins when the female adult butterfly lays the egg and finishes when the butterfly turns into an adult butterfly. In the first stage of the process, the egg is laid on the milkwood leaf. Then, the egg hatches into the larva caterpillar after five to ten days of development. After that, the larva caterpillar sheds its old skin five to six times in three weeks and changes into the pupa. In the fourth stage of the process, the pupa undergoes a transformation and a new adult butterfly emerges from the pupa. The adult butterfly is motionless because the wings are quite small. In the final stage of the process, the adult butterfly makes its wings to the adult stage so the adult butterfly is ready to fly. The life cycle is now complete and it will begin all over again.
The
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picture illustrates the life cycle of the butterfly.

In general
, the
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process
contains a series of
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stages
in a life cycle of the
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butterfly
,
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involves five main steps which
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begins
when the female adult
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butterfly
lays the egg and finishes when the
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butterfly
turns into an adult butterfly.

In the
first
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stage
of the
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process
, the egg
is laid
on the
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milkwood
leaf. Then, the egg hatches into the larva caterpillar after five to ten days of development. After that, the larva caterpillar sheds its
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old
skin five to six times in three weeks and
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changes
into the pupa.

In the fourth
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stage
of the
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process
, the pupa undergoes a transformation and a new adult
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butterfly
emerges from the pupa. The adult
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butterfly
is motionless
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because
the wings are quite
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small
. In the final
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stage
of the
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process
, the adult
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butterfly
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makes
its wings to the adult
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stage
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so
the adult
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butterfly
is ready to
fly
. The life cycle is
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now
complete and it will
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begin
all over again.

IELTS essay the below picture shows the life cycle of butterfly

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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