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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. g5GWL
All of us use different resources to do research. Nowadays, most people prefer to use the Internet because it is easier. Nevertheless, others believe that it is better to do it with printed materials. In this essay, I will explain why both of approaches are valid and important. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why I believe that by using the internet we will get more up-to-date and reliable information
All of us
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use
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resources to do research. Nowadays, most
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people
prefer to
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use
the Internet
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because
it is easier.
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, others believe that it is better to do it with printed materials. In this essay, I will
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explain
why both of approaches are valid and
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important
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In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why I believe that by using the internet we will
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get
more up-to-date and reliable information

IELTS essay It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
71 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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