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It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. n1pWR

There is a belief that opening your own business is much more satisfactory rather than working for entrepreneurs. As far as I am concerned, It is better to work for someone else based on some significant reasons. It is common knowledge that private entrepreneurs tend to have excessively more responsibility than ordinary workers which is believed to be a really stressful job. Businessmen should be responsible not only for themselves, but also for their staff, as a consequence, being a head of a company you should also solve your workers` problems. Moreover, entrepreneurs have to constantly control working process and it is extremely challenging. As a result, if you want to be a businessmen or businesswomen you should be ready for the great responsibility and feel stress almost every day. People running your own business usually have grossly less free time. The bigger company a person has, the less leisure time he or she has. Boundaries between work and real life dissolve for such people and they tend to think and breathe work. For example, they are neither able to spend their time on hobbies, nor have enough time for spending it with their families. As a result, most of entrepreneurs work a lot at the cost of their free time which could be spent on private life or hobby. In conclusion, it seems to me that it is overly complex to run your own business because people have to do it at the expense of their private life and the activity that they enjoy doing.

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own
 business is much more satisfactory rather
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entrepreneurs
. As far as I am concerned
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work
 for someone else based on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 significant reasons.

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entrepreneurs
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company
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entrepreneurs
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 or businesswomen you should be ready for the great responsibility and feel This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 almost every day.

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People
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own
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time
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. For example
, they are neither able to spend their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
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enough
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time
 for spending it with their families. As a result
, most of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagerexecutiveadministratorproducercontractor
entrepreneurs
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work
 a lot at the cost of their free You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 on private life or hobby. In conclusion
, it seems to me that it is overly
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own
 business This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do it at the expense of their private life and the activity that they enjoy doing. 