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it is impossible to help everyone around the world. so governement should focus only on people of their country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

it is impossible to help everyone around the world. so governement should focus only on people of their country. E7RRq
In this modernized era, tecnology is impacting our life as a result machines replaced manual workers in terms of work. which gives rise to poverty. However, it is not possible to help every individual arond the globe and it is claimed that government should focus only on natives of their country. In the crumb of my writing. I shall discuss both and give appropriate points to strengthen my views. To commence with, . . . . . . .
In this modernized era,
tecnology
is impacting our life
as a result
machines replaced manual workers in terms of work.
which
gives rise to poverty.
However
, it is not possible to
help
every individual
arond
the globe and it
is claimed
that
government
should focus
only
on natives of their country. In the crumb of my writing. I shall discuss both and give appropriate points to strengthen my views. To commence with
, .
.
.
.
.
.
.
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IELTS essay it is impossible to help everyone around the world. so governement should focus only on people of their country.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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