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What is the best advertisement that you have come across? Why do you think it was so effective?

What is the best advertisement that you have come across? Why do you think it was so effective? 0w8OQ
I have seen many banner and television advertisements, but one of my favourite and effective advertisement is a five-star advertisement. Overall, the advertisement is about chocolate and its tagline is, lost in the taste of five-star. Moreover, there will be two friends in that ad namely Ramesh and Suresh. Whenever they eat the chocolate they indulge themselves by enjoying the taste of the chocolate and they forget their names, and they introduce each other again. This process repeats in a loop whenever they bite that chocolate. This advertisement is funny as well as have the deep meaning in it that one will lose themselves if they eat this five-star chocolate.
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banner and television
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advertisements
,
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favourite
and effective
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advertisement
is a five-star advertisement.

Overall
, the
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advertisement
is about chocolate and its tagline is, lost in the taste of five-star.
Moreover
, there will be two friends in that ad
namely
Ramesh and Suresh. Whenever they eat the chocolate they indulge themselves by enjoying the taste of the
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chocolate and
they forget their names, and they introduce each other again. This process repeats in a loop whenever they bite that chocolate. This
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advertisement
is
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funny
as well
as have the deep meaning in it that one will lose themselves if they eat this five-star chocolate.
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IELTS essay What is the best advertisement that you have come across? Why do you think it was so effective?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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