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In various countries the number of animals and plants are decling . Why do you think it is happening. How this issue can be solve

In various countries the number of animals and plants are decling. Why do you think it is happening. How this issue can be solve YR9qK
It is irrefutable say that animals and plants plays an imperative part in eco-system and food chain. However, various animal species and trees are decreasing day by day in all around the world. According to my point of view, deforestation is the biggest reason behind this particular Statement but this essay also discuss some points for solving this issue in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons, why plants and animals species are continously decrease. The first point is that is deforestation because numbers of individuals cut down the tress to manufacture the paper and wood furniture. So, wild animals move to urban area and people hunt the those animals because city side people are sacred from wild animals. In addition to this climate change have harmful effect on the animals. To explain it, in many parts of the world climate become hot and various animals can not live in that weather as a result those animals species are die due to the terrible climate. On the other hand, this issue will be tackled by following steps. First of all, national authorities should make strict rules against cutting the tress and also motivate the citizens to reforestation the tress. Secondly, regime can start collecting the fine when people cut the tress with out government permission. Moreover, the other points is that regime should built zoo for those animals species which are decling day by day A part from this people stop hunting the animals because by hunting many wild species are decreasing such as elephant and loin. Hence, by adopting that ideas folks can solve that issue. To sum up, although wild animals and plants are decling by deforestation and hunting but with the help of government this issue can mitigate because they can impose the law for saving the animals life.
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animals
and plants plays an imperative part in
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eco-system
and food chain.
However
, various
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animal
species and trees are decreasing day by day in all around the world. According to my
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point
of view, deforestation is the biggest reason behind this particular Statement
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but
this essay
also
discuss
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some
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points
for solving this
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issue
in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons, why plants and
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animals
species are
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continously
decrease. The
first
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point
is
that is
deforestation
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because
numbers of individuals
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cut
down the
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tress
to manufacture the paper and wood furniture.
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So
, wild
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animals
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move
to urban area and
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people
hunt the those
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animals
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because
city side
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people
are sacred
from wild
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animals
.
In addition
to this climate
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change
have harmful effect on the
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animals
. To
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explain
it, in
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many
parts of the world climate become hot and various
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animals
can not
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live
in that weather
as a result
those
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animals
species are
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die
due to the terrible climate.
On the other hand
, this
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issue
will
be tackled
by following steps.
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First of all
, national authorities should
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make
strict
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rules
against cutting the
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tress
and
also
motivate the citizens to reforestation the
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tress
.
Secondly
, regime can
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start
collecting the fine when
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people
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cut
the
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tress
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with out
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government
permission.
Moreover
, the other
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points
is that regime should
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built
zoo for those
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animals
species which are
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decling
day by day A part from this
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people
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stop
hunting the
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animals
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because
by hunting
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many
wild species are decreasing such as elephant and loin.
Hence
, by adopting that
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ideas
folks can solve that
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issue
. To sum up, although wild
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animals
and plants are
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decling
by deforestation and hunting
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but
with the
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help
of
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government
this
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issue
can mitigate
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because
they can impose the law for saving the
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animals
life.
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IELTS essay In various countries the number of animals and plants are decling. Why do you think it is happening. How this issue can be solve

Essay
  American English
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305 words
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