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It is better to having friends with similar nature or other people said its good to have opposite nature friends.give your views.

It is better to having friends with similar nature or other people said its good to have opposite nature friends. give your views. 9aoxr
Friendship is a boon in everybody's life. No one can survive without a true friend in his journey of life. Various people said that friends with same opinions are better than those who have different opinions. Well, It is never ending discussion. Every one has their own choice on choosing friends. In this essay, I will discuss both views with logical explanation. First of all, I would like to say, no one is forced to choose her friends in any stage of life. It is totally on them, whom they want to spend their time. There are many benefits, if the two persons have same interest. They enjoy each other's company. They do not required any replacement instead of them. They can explore things together. For instance - if both have unique style in cooking and want to open restaurant, that will be brilliant for them. Either he or his friend can build up their dream. Like, Last year two friends obtain first place in dancing competition. With each other support they can achieve any thing. They will feel serene and enthusiastically keep motivating them for new challenges. On the other hand, if the two friends have diffrent opinions, they will try to modify themselves in each other's way. They will observe each other and frequently try to do something new. They will understand the meaning of pateince. Everyday will be a challenge for them to stay together; this will make their bond strong. Their life style, inter personal skills along with this their thinking ability will change, which is may be a positive impact, as everybody wants to be perfect in this life. All I want to say is opposite attracts and creating new memories and experiment make their life more inspiring opt to new lessons learnt from each other. At the end i would like to say, its person's personal choice, for whom he want to be friend. Friendship can not be measured on few quality scales. If you like someone one ' s company than definitely you would start up your partnetship.
Friendship is a boon in everybody's
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life
. No one can survive without a true
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friend
in his journey of
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life
. Various
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people
said that
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friends
with same opinions are better than those who have
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different
opinions. Well, It is never ending discussion. Every one has
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their
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own
choice on choosing
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friends
. In this essay, I will discuss both views with logical explanation.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I would like to say, no one
is forced
to choose her
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friends
in any stage of
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life
. It is
totally
on them, whom they
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want
to spend their time. There are
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many
benefits, if the two persons have same
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interest
. They enjoy each other's
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company
. They do not
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required
any replacement
instead
of them.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
can explore things together.
For instance
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-
if both have unique style in cooking and
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want
to open restaurant, that will be brilliant for them. Either he or his
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friend
can build up their dream. Like, Last year two
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friends
obtain
first
place in dancing competition. With each other support they can achieve
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
. They will feel serene and
enthusiastically
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keep
motivating them for
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new
challenges.

On the other hand
, if the two
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friends
have
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diffrent
opinions, they will try to modify themselves in each other's way. They will observe each other and
frequently
try to do something
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new
. They will understand the meaning of
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pateince
.
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
will be a challenge for them to stay together; this will
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make
their bond strong. Their
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life
style,
This word is normally spelled as one.
inter personal
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skills
along with this their thinking ability will
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change
, which is may be a
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positive
impact, as everybody
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wants
to be perfect in this
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life
. All I
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want
to say is opposite attracts and creating
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new
memories and experiment
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make
their
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life
more inspiring opt to
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new
lessons
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learnt
from each other.

At the
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end
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i
would like to say, its person's personal choice, for whom he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to be
Consider using a past participle here: "friended".
friend
. Friendship can not
be measured
on few quality scales.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you like someone one
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'
s
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company
than definitely you would
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start
up your
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partnetship
.

IELTS essay It is better to having friends with similar nature or other people said its good to have opposite nature friends. give your views.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
6.0
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