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Biography of tyrant people

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If you read biography of tyrant people you will realize that they had hard and bad past always they verdict everything to others And they like that everyone is obedient to them And kneel before them These oppressors always caused tumult But first of all, they are in a bad mood and feel dejected These people are so cruel that they are not even willing to help charity and the needy They never recede oppressing, but surely the day will come to that swarm of people and cause them to wobble.
If you read biography of tyrant
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people
you will realize that they had
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hard
and
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bad
past always
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they verdict
everything to others And they like that everyone is obedient to them And kneel
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before
them These oppressors always caused tumult
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But
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first of all
, they are in a
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bad
mood and feel dejected These
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people
are
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so
cruel that they are not even willing to
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help
charity and the needy They never recede oppressing,
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but
surely
the day will
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come
to that swarm of
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people
and cause them to wobble.
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IELTS essay Biography of tyrant people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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