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It is believed that working in team enhances the skills better then working alone. Do you agree or disagree. v.2

It is believed that working in team enhances the skills better then working alone. v. 2
Youngsters are looking employment at the cutting-edge competition. Although some people reckon that working, self employed is helping to increase skills, I strongly agree that working team is a great option to surge skills. This essay elaborates with the following paragraphs. To start with, everyone wants better opportunities in their specific field. Generally, in reputed company has various platforms where their employee works in groups. Working in groups will be made cheaper because everyone has own point of view, share the expertise with others that will help to own skills. Moreover, having expertise with any skill serve the good opportunity. Sometime possible that no knowledge about the skill, but in the group get the chance to learn new things. For instance, every project needs various skilled person and handle the whole project in the group so get a chance to lead the project. Moreover, every company have umpteen well experience team. Working with the team will get better place where learn by self and represent to the company. By doing this, sometime benefit for achievement the position within few duration. Additionally, everyone wants to learn from someone else rather than prepare by self that will help to make a strong point and help to group members. For example, own skill will help to lead the crowd. In conclusion, working with a squad, get benefit to enhance own talent, lead the crew. Also, help to meet or work with the foreign client's plan which amazing opportunity to make a strong resume to show identity.
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reckon that
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self employed
is helping to increase
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skills
, I
strongly
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agree
that
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working
team is a great option to surge
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skills
. This essay elaborates with the following paragraphs.

To
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start
with, everyone wants better opportunities in their specific field.
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, in reputed
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company
has various platforms where their employee works in
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groups
.
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Working
in
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groups
will
be made
cheaper
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because
everyone has
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own
point of view, share the expertise with others that will
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help
to
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own
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skills
.
Moreover
, having expertise with any
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skill
serve the
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good
opportunity. Sometime possible that no knowledge about the
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skill
,
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in the
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group
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get
the chance to learn new things.
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, every project needs various skilled person and handle the whole project in the
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group
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so
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get
a chance to lead the project.

Moreover
, every
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company
have umpteen well experience team.
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Working
with the team will
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get
better place where learn by self and represent to the
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company
. By doing this, sometime benefit for achievement the position within
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Additionally
, everyone wants to learn from someone else
rather
than prepare by self that will
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help
to
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make
a strong point and
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to
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group
members.
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,
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own
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skill
will
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help
to lead the crowd.

In conclusion
,
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working
with a squad,
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get
benefit to enhance
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own
talent, lead the crew.
Also
,
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help
to
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meet
or work with the foreign client's plan which amazing opportunity to
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make
a strong resume to
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show
identity.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It is believed that working in team enhances the skills better then working alone. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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