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It is argued that we should replace police enforcement with technologies in crime prevention and solving cases.

It is argued that we should replace police enforcement with technologies in crime prevention and solving cases. PRXPJ
Although technologies and machines are being smarter every day with new abilities and features to help us in crime invention, the police are always an effective tool to stop crimes. It is argued that we should replace police enforcement with technologies in crime prevention and solving cases. This essay will elucidate why governments should not replace human resources with machines, robots in fathoming misdemeanor. First and foremost, the police are always watching people, judging them on the street every day. They read others' facial expressions, use judgments, evidence, or clues to identify crime hotspots and criminals. Law enforcement agency has successfully solved dangerous cases, catch wanted delinquents. In addition, without any help from humans, machines and technologies can only identify the lawbreakers, but do not have the ability to catch them. Secondly, cut – to edge technologies are being used all over the world by policemen in facial recognition, crime predictions. Helicopters, drones, and security cameras are widely utilized to spy and track people. Big accomplishments such as high-quality microscopes, x-ray machines also help forensic experts in postmortem, murder cases. In the future, it is believed that scientists will develop more technologies in crime prevention. In short, with the help of a variety of up-to-date technology, crime prevention is becoming easier for the police, and they are using it verry well.
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technologies
and
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machines
are being smarter every day with new abilities and features to
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help
us in
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crime
invention, the
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police
are always an effective tool to
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stop
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crimes
. It
is argued
that we should replace
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police
enforcement with
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technologies
in
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crime
prevention and solving cases. This essay will elucidate why
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governments
should not replace human resources with
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machines
, robots in fathoming misdemeanor.

First
and foremost, the
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police
are always watching
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people
, judging them on the street every day. They read others' facial expressions,
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use
judgments, evidence, or clues to identify
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crime
hotspots and criminals. Law enforcement agency has
successfully
solved
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dangerous
cases, catch wanted delinquents.
In addition
, without any
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help
from humans,
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machines
and
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technologies
can
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only
identify the lawbreakers,
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but
do not have the ability to catch them.

Secondly
,
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to edge
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technologies
are being
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used
all over the world by policemen in facial recognition,
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crime
predictions. Helicopters, drones, and security cameras are
widely
utilized to spy and
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track
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people
.
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Big
accomplishments such as high-quality microscopes, x-ray
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machines
also
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help
forensic experts in postmortem, murder cases. In the future, it
is believed
that scientists will develop more
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technologies
in
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crime
prevention.

In short, with the
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help
of a variety of up-to-date
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technology
,
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crime
prevention is becoming easier for the
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police
, and they are using it
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verry
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IELTS essay It is argued that we should replace police enforcement with technologies in crime prevention and solving cases.

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