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Describe your plan for one of your upcoming working days.

Describe your plan for one of your upcoming working days. pKbN9
Friday is always my busiest day. In the morning, I do my homework or study via youtube. When it's 10 o'clock, I have to cook lunch for my family. When the meal is over, my brother will wash the dishes while I will clean up the leftovers. After that, in the afternoon, I have class and extra lessons. Since I study until 19: 30, my mother will be the one to cook. Although the volume of lessons is a lot, I feel very happy because one more day has a lot of knowledge.
Friday is always my busiest day. In the morning, I do my homework or study via
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youtube
. When it's 10 o'clock, I
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have to
cook lunch for my family. When the meal is over, my brother will wash the dishes while I will clean up the leftovers. After that, in the afternoon, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and extra lessons. Since I study until 19: 30, my mother will be the one to cook. Although the volume of lessons is a lot, I feel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
happy
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because
one more day has
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a lot of
knowledge.

IELTS essay Describe your plan for one of your upcoming working days.

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