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It is argued that using facebook, email or ways of communicating through internet have bad effects on personal relationships. I partly agree with this statement as these ways make people do not treasure the relationship.

It is argued that using facebook, email or ways of communicating through internet have bad effects on personal relationships. I partly agree with this statement as these ways make people do not treasure the relationship. E7aaL
It is argued that using facebook, email or ways of communicating through internet have bad effects on personal relationships. I partly agree with this statement as these ways make people do not treasure the relationship. On the one hand, easily in communicating create a change to people cheat on their relationship. For example, through facebook people are so convinient to make friends and contact with other. In that way, some bad men stay in relationship with many girls in the same time because of conviniently in message through messager. In addition, they are also do not treasure love between people when they have nothing to chalenge their love by distance. On the other hand, communicate through internet help solve problem about distance. For insatnce, some couples fall in with each other but they live so far away, so they cannot meet in regurlarly and send an email or chating help them can take care each other and express their love. Not only lovers, but also relative can keep in touch insipe of they live different continent. In conclusion, althought there are negative effects on personal relationships, the positive impacts still need to be considered.
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that using
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facebook
, email or ways of communicating
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through
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bad
effects on personal
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relationships
. I partly
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agree
with this statement as these ways
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make
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people
do not treasure the relationship.

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easily
in communicating create a
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change
to
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people
cheat on their
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relationship
.
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,
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through
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facebook
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people
are
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so
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convinient
to
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make
friends and contact with
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other
. In that way,
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some
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bad
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men
stay in
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relationship
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many
girls in the same time
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because
of
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conviniently
in message
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through
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messager
.
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, they are
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do
not treasure
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love
between
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people
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chalenge
their
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love
by distance.

On the
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other
hand, communicate
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internet
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solve problem about distance. For
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insatnce
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some
couples fall in with each
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but
they
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live
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far away,
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they cannot
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meet
in
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regurlarly
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send
an email or
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chating
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help
them can take care each
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other
and express their
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love
. Not
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only
lovers,
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also
relative can
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keep
in touch
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insipe
of they
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live
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different
continent.

In conclusion
,
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althought
there are
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negative
effects on personal
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relationships
, the
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positive
impacts
still
need to
be considered
.
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IELTS essay It is argued that using facebook, email or ways of communicating through internet have bad effects on personal relationships. I partly agree with this statement as these ways make people do not treasure the relationship.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
194 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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