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I come from Quang Ninh which is a province located in the North

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I come from Quang Ninh which is a province located in the North - east coast of Viet Nam. It has both forests and a sea with a variety of precious forest products and seafood. Quang Ninh is a major tourist center of the country with many cultural, historical and beautiful natural landscapes. In particular, Ha Long Bay is a scenic spot that has twice been recognized by UNESCO as a World Natural Heritage Site. In addition, this is also home to many people with diverse customs. everyone can come here and enjoy the beauty of the place. besides, you will enjoy fresh seafood at a very cheap price. more and more people are coming here to travel from all over the world, so this place becomes crowded and bustling. But, too much waste that tourists leave behind is a threat to the environment here. that adversely affects our living environment. anyway, I still love and enjoy living here.
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here and enjoy the beauty of the place.
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besides
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more
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, too much waste that tourists
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behind is a threat to the environment here.
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IELTS essay I come from Quang Ninh which is a province located in the North

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  American English
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159 words
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