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it is argued that there are a large number of certified individuals, who are going to fill the opportunities in fields, such as engineering, computing and medicine of developed countries from developing countries. Even though there are people who think that supporting this, the richer countries are extracting wealth from developing nations. Meanwhile there are people who feels it's a part of work throughout the globe. Therefore, I completely agree with this openion and think that both side have valid points.

it is argued that there are a large number of certified individuals, who are going to fill the opportunities in fields, such as engineering, computing and medicine of developed countries from developing countries. Even though there are people who think that supporting this, the richer countries are extracting wealth from developing nations. Meanwhile there are people who feels it's a part of work throughout the globe. Therefore, I completely agree with this openion and think that both side have valid points. doBMo
it is argued that there are a large number of certified individuals, who are going to fill the opportunities in fields, such as engineering, computing and medicine of developed countries from developing countries. Even though there are people who think that supporting this, the richer countries are extracting wealth from developing nations. Meanwhile there are people who feels it's a part of work throughout the globe. Therefore, I completely agree with this openion and think that both side have valid points.
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IELTS essay it is argued that there are a large number of certified individuals, who are going to fill the opportunities in fields, such as engineering, computing and medicine of developed countries from developing countries. Even though there are people who think that supporting this, the richer countries are extracting wealth from developing nations. Meanwhile there are people who feels it's a part of work throughout the globe. Therefore, I completely agree with this openion and think that both side have valid points.

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