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IT in the time of Pandemic

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Today IT is playing a major role in not only in business but also in situation like pandemic. Pandemic is taking people away from each other however IT is bringing people together. Social Media and meeting platforms like Zoom is really a boom for the human in the times of pandemic like Covid-19. Isolation from the world impacts the mental state of a person and does harm more than help. It is here where IT helps people in keeping in touch with out side world via social media, meeting and online platforms.
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away from each other
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together. Social Media and meeting platforms like Zoom is
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a boom for the human in the times of pandemic like Covid-19. Isolation from the world impacts the mental state of a person and does harm more than
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. It is here where IT
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in keeping in touch with
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world via social media, meeting and online platforms.
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IELTS essay IT in the time of Pandemic

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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