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average percentage of sodium, sugar...

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Overall, it was conspicuous that the amount of ingredients that consumed in meals and snacks were changing unsteadily. In addition, it was also remarkable that some mineral in foods are unnecessary. The proportion of sodium accounted for 43% in dinner while saturated fat and added sugar was only 37% and 23% which the numeral for every other meal wasn’t identical. On the contrary, sodium reduced to the lowest in snacks, during that time, sugar reached the peak, specifically 42% and saturated fat was merely 21%. As far as those nutrients concerned, breakfast made up a small percentage above ingredients. Added sugar and saturated fat maintained at 16% while sodium dropped to 14%. However, sodium still rapidly speed up at 29% and sugar reached the nadir at 19%. In conclusion, we can seemly see the dramatic rate in above components. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Overall
, it was conspicuous that the amount of ingredients that consumed in meals and snacks were changing unsteadily
. In addition
, it was also
 remarkable that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 mineral in foods are unnecessary. The proportion of sodium accounted for 43% in dinner while saturated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 37% and 23% which the numeral for every other meal wasn’t identical. On the contrary
, sodium This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to the lowest in snacks, during that time, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 reached the peak, specifically
 42% and saturated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 was merely
 21%.

As far as those nutrients concerned, breakfast made up a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 percentage above ingredients. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
Added
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 and saturated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 maintained at 16% while sodium dropped to 14%. However
, sodium still
rapidly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accelerate
speed up
 at 29% and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 reached the nadir at 19%.

In conclusion
, we can seemly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the dramatic rate in above components. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 