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It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

People learned throughout their entire lives. Learning is ability that we can be proud off as a human being. Knowledge is everywhere to our house, street, office, and library in every part of the world. In my belief we start our learning capability in our environments but we can enhance it by reading books. In this essay I would compare and contrast my opinion. Firstly, in our entire lives most of us think likely that experience are a knowledge that nobody can take away from us this is comparable to a saying that “education is a knowledge that no one can take away from you” I believe in this because from my point of view gaining knowledge from the school is far way more than learning in our surroundings. By reading books we can discover a lot of things, which we never know by this we can expand our understanding. Secondly, gaining experience through our everyday lives is something that we can’t learn in the books. Such as reality, riding a bicycle, and playing physical games and so on. This is some of the things that we can learn by reading books. Reality is effective contrast knowledge that we can learn by reading, some books have a big difference to our reality. Finally, some of the illustrious person that we know doesn’t have a proper education. By reading books but they are incredibly successful. I think better experience to life is a great stepping stone to our success. Even though, we can’t learn everything by reading books. This factor benefits us something that we can’t learn by experience. Personally speaking in my opinion, experience is the best knowledge that we can use to our everyday lives.
People
learned throughout their entire
lives
. Learning is ability that we can be proud off as a human being.
Knowledge
is everywhere to our
house
, street, office, and library in every part of the world. In my belief we
start
our learning capability in our environments
but
we can enhance it by
reading
books
. In this essay I would compare and contrast my opinion.

Firstly
, in our entire
lives
most of us
think
likely that
experience
are a
knowledge
that nobody can take away from us this is comparable to a saying that “education is a
knowledge
that no one can take away from you” I believe in this
because
from my point of view gaining
knowledge
from the school is
far
way more than learning in our surroundings. By
reading
books
we can discover
a lot of
things, which we never know by this we can expand our understanding.

Secondly
, gaining
experience
through our everyday
lives
is something that we can’t
learn
in the
books
. Such as reality, riding a bicycle, and playing physical games and
so
on. This is
some of the
things that we can
learn
by
reading
books
. Reality is effective contrast
knowledge
that we can
learn
by
reading
,
some
books
have a
big
difference to our reality.

Finally
,
some of the
illustrious person that we know doesn’t have a proper education. By
reading
books
but
they are
incredibly
successful. I
think
better
experience
to life is a great stepping stone to our success.

Even though
, we can’t
learn
everything by
reading
books
. This factor benefits us something that we can’t
learn
by
experience
.
Personally
speaking in my opinion,
experience
is the best
knowledge
that we can
use
to our everyday
lives
.
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IELTS essay It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books. ” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

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