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issues of ecology demand serious relationships

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In the modern world, issues of ecology demand serious relationships and decisions from world population. Majority persuade regularly the importance of protecting the environment for our followers. It is an undeniable fact and i agree with the general idea, but however, there are some aspects that bring me unaccountable questions. Firstly, I believe that if every person that lives on our planet makes an effort to improve general ecological status, changes of circumstances are possible. I trust the phrase that hope will die the latter of all and we always have opportunity to transform the world. Opposite to it, no matter how sad it is, if we give up one and all, it will lead to catastrophe and collapse. I mean, man is an integral part of nature and if this system crashes, all man-made structures will be crashed too. If we appreciate our past and all our historical achievements we must protect it. Secondly, we need to remember that people’s habitats and thinking alter very slowly. This process of changing minds could be reflected from our realities when humans confirm that they can kill or injure someone just for his choice or appearance. Another evidence is when we see that the population prefers to not vaccinate just because of mistructing to science. It is difficult to reason about solving global problems while significant duties like not hurting each other do not perform. To sum up, there is our duty to protect the environment but we can not be confident about general humanity.

In the modern world, issues of ecology demand serious relationships and decisions from world population. Majority persuade regularly
 the importance of protecting the environment for our followers. It is an undeniable fact and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the general This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
however
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 aspects that bring me unaccountable questions.

Firstly
, I believe that if every person that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 on our planet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 an effort to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 general ecological status, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of circumstances are possible. I trust the phrase that hope will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
 the latter of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).all, and
all and
 we always have opportunity to transform the world. Opposite to it, no matter how sad it is, if we give up one and all, it will lead to catastrophe and collapse. I mean, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 is an integral part of nature and if this system crashes, all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made structures will be crashed
 too. If we appreciate our past and all our historical achievements we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 protect it.

Secondly
, we need to remember that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s habitats and thinking alter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
slowly
. This process of changing minds could be reflected
 from our realities when humans confirm that they can kill or injure someone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for his choice or appearance. Another evidence is when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the population prefers to not vaccinate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Possible spelling mistake found.mistrusting
mistructing
 to science. It is difficult to reason about solving global problems while significant duties like not hurting each other do not perform.

To sum up, there is our duty to protect the environment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we can not be confident about general humanity. 