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Is there anything you find difficult about living in a foreign country?

Is there anything you find difficult about living in a foreign country? E7OQx
To my way of thinking, language is the main and fundamental barrier regarding to living in another country, because it can also bring about challenges in other areas of life. And of course, technology has alleviated a lot of challenges, but it's not about having a good command of the language. It's about the practical use of it. Language in cultural context. It is inevitable. It just takes time for immigrants to adapt but meanwhile it can cause them to segregate themselves from others
To my way of thinking, language is the main and fundamental barrier
regarding to
living in another country,
because
it can
also
bring about challenges in other areas of life. And
of course
, technology has alleviated
a lot of
challenges,
but
it's not about having a
good
command of the language. It's about the practical
use
of it. Language in cultural context. It is inevitable. It
just
takes time for immigrants to adapt
but
meanwhile it can cause them to segregate themselves from
others
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IELTS essay Is there anything you find difficult about living in a foreign country?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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