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is there a bus stop near here? yes the nearest bus stop is on corner, opposite police station

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is there a bus stop near here? yes the nearest bus stop is on corner, opposite police station. Life in the city is full of activity. Early in the morning hundreds of people rush out of their homes in the manner ants do when their nest is broken. Soon the streets are full of traffic. Shops and offices open, students flock to their schools and the day's work begins. The city now throb with activity, and it is full of noise. Hundreds of sight-seers, tourists and others visit many places of interest in the city while businessmen from various parts of the world arrive to transact business.
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is
there a bus
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stop
near here?
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yes
the nearest bus
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stop
is on corner, opposite police station. Life in the city is full of activity. Early in the morning hundreds of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
rush out of their homes in the manner ants do when their nest
is broken
.
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Soon
the streets are full of traffic. Shops and offices open, students flock to their schools and the day's work
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begins
. The city
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now
throb with activity, and it is full of noise. Hundreds of sight-seers, tourists
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and others
visit
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many
places of interest in the city while businessmen from various parts of the world arrive to transact business.
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IELTS essay is there a bus stop near here? yes the nearest bus stop is on corner, opposite police station

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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