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Is the nature in danger? how ? discuss about the causes and solutions

It is said that nature is on the verge of the danger of deterioration. I completely agree with this claim and it is obvious that if it is not done any to protect nature, would be expected to occur the irreparable events. First of all, the overpopulation phenomenon and growing carbon footprint have converted to the main concern about the environment. These changes have affected destructively soil, air, and water. Simply put, the more environment would be polluted, the more species and biodiversity are likely to go through extinction. Thus, people and various organizations should take the approaches to bring back the balance of nature which has upset due to human's influences. Furthermore, over-cultivation and over-used fertilizer and pesticides have been hard on the environment and have endangered all flora and fauna lives. In other words, nonreasonable way of agriculture and gardening could little by little eliminated the fertility of the soil and it would be a key factor for desertification. In consequence, disposing of plains and grass in order to cultivate threaten the creatures remarkably. Whilst by moderately using and teaching the right way of exploitation of the soil to farmers can prevent to damage it and protect the productivity of that. In conclusion, not only is nature gradually being damaged due to different factors like the greenhouse effect and incorrect methods of utilizing soil but also the creatures are in danger of extinction. thereby this should be taken into consideration and be reduced the rate of negative effects.
It
is said
that
nature
is on the verge of the
danger
of deterioration. I completely
agree
with this
claim and
it is obvious that if it is not done any to protect
nature
, would be
expected
to occur the irreparable
events
.

First of all
, the overpopulation phenomenon and growing carbon footprint have converted to the main concern about the environment. These
changes
have
affected
destructively
soil
, air, and water.
Simply
put, the more environment would
be polluted
, the more species and biodiversity are likely to go through extinction.
Thus
,
people
and various organizations should take the approaches to bring back the balance of
nature
which has upset due to
human's influences
.

Furthermore
, over-cultivation and over-
used
fertilizer and pesticides have been
hard
on the environment and have endangered all flora and fauna
lives
.
In other words
,
nonreasonable
way of agriculture and gardening could
little
by
little
eliminated the fertility of the
soil and
it would be a key factor for desertification. In consequence, disposing of plains and grass in order to cultivate threaten the creatures
remarkably
. Whilst by
moderately
using and teaching the right way of exploitation of the
soil
to farmers can
prevent
to damage it and protect the productivity of that.

In conclusion
, not
only
is
nature
gradually
being damaged
due to
different
factors like the greenhouse effect and incorrect methods of utilizing
soil
but
also
the creatures are in
danger
of extinction.
thereby
this should
be taken
into consideration and be
reduced
the rate of
negative
effects.
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IELTS essay Is the nature in danger? how? discuss about the causes and solutions

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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