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Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.4

Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4
Writing and lecture are two important aspects of our daily lives. Due to fact that all of our activities rely on these two skills, it is almost impossible to subsists without them. Even people in the most isolate places, know at least how to write their names. In today' s hectic life, if a person doesn' t dominate well the writing and reading, he or she is considered as an ignorant. Therefore, I consider that those two skills are more important today than in the past, and I based my point in some arguments that I will develop in the next paragraphs. To begin with, writing and reading are very wealthy today because the technologic development has made everything digital. Inasmuch as innovation has arrived, most of the people' daily activities rely on digital machines. Therefore, as we all should be aware, in order to use a digital machine people should know how to read and write. For instance, let' s imagine that a person who wants to make a phone call doesn' t read well, and then he or she won' t be able to dial the phone number and send a text message. Even more, with a simple daily activity as is using the microwave to heat the food, basic understanding of reading is needed. As we can see, nowadays if we don' t read or write we might not develop the common activities. In addition, in today' s world, a person social status is given by their economic or ' ' intellectual stand' ' . Considering that, a person who doesn' t possess neither writing nor reading, for sure will be isolated by citizens. For instance, people who didn’t attend to school are defined as useless because they cannot carry on basic tasks, thus, a good education guarantee a good social status. Even though, I acknowledge that some people who don' t know how to read or write might achieve success in business or other projects, it seems to me that the possibilities are less. To sum up, for the reasons stated above, I consider that today it is more important to read and write because there is a greater demand of these skills and also, if you write and read better you might have a better social status.
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, for sure will
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might achieve success in business or other projects, it seems to me that the possibilities are less.

To sum up, for the reasons stated above, I consider that
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it is more
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better you might have a better social status.
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IELTS essay Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
382 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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