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Is teen angst happen in your life

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When it comes to moodiness, Most of the teenagers did not try to understand what happened to them. They and their parents would like to believe that it is caused by teen angst. Simultaneously, aggressive behaviors might be symptoms of mental illness which refers to depression. Therefore, parents should learn to notice through their children's behaviors in order to help them from mental sickness on time. The article reveals 11% of depressive disorders among adolescents. Unfortunately, only 1 in 5 of them could get help directly. By this, there are a diversity of obvious symptoms of depression; anger, lack of energy, hopelessness, Isolation, low self-esteem, negative thinking, sadness, etc. All of these conditions normalized depression in teens because they could be diagnosed as a result of teen angst. Furthermore, there are areas of concern for parents to notice their child’s life. To consider the intensity of their feelings and behaviors, the duration of their experiences, and the domains in which they take place are also the diagnosis of the clinicians. As a result, the way to decrease the number of depression in puberty is to serve them to be diagnosed with doctors and early treatment. Unexpectedly, I never thought I would say the article changed the way I think, but in this case, it is true. The knowledge that I have gained from this site is more than the state of teen angst. I always thought that all aggressive behaviors are common for being teenagers. It could be turned into depression. Plus, I believe that most people are too late to realize themselves and suffer inside. To admit that I never had an idea to learn about my feelings. The moment I read all the symptoms, I started to think about my behaviors. I realized that sometimes I had some kinds of them, but fortunately, I did not engage in the disorder. However, I already have a fundamental guideline for me to observe myself in everyday life and caused me to see myself through new aspects.
When it
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comes
to moodiness, Most of the
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teenagers
did not try to understand what happened to them. They and their parents would like to believe that it
is caused
by
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teen
angst.
Simultaneously
, aggressive
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behaviors
might be symptoms of mental illness which refers to depression.
Therefore
, parents should learn to notice through their children's
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behaviors
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them from mental sickness on time.

The article reveals 11% of depressive disorders among adolescents. Unfortunately,
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only
1 in 5 of them could
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get
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help
directly
. By this, there are a diversity of obvious symptoms of depression; anger, lack of energy, hopelessness, Isolation, low self-esteem,
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negative
thinking, sadness, etc. All of these conditions normalized depression in
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teens
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because
they could
be diagnosed
as a result
of
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teen
angst.
Furthermore
, there are areas of concern for parents to notice their child’s life. To consider the intensity of their feelings and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
, the duration of their experiences, and the domains in which they take place are
also
the diagnosis of the clinicians.
As a result
, the way to decrease the number of depression in puberty is to serve them to
be diagnosed
with doctors and early treatment.

Unexpectedly
, I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
I would say the article
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changed
the way I
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think
,
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but
in this case
, it is true. The knowledge that I have gained from this site is more than the state of
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teen
angst. I always
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thought
that all aggressive
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behaviors
are common for being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
. It could
be turned
into depression. Plus, I believe that most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are too late to realize themselves and suffer inside. To admit that I never had an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to learn about my feelings. The moment I read all the symptoms, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about my
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behaviors
. I realized that
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sometimes
I had
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some
kinds of them,
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but
fortunately
, I did not engage in the disorder.
However
, I already have a fundamental guideline for me to observe myself in everyday life and caused me to
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see
myself through new aspects.
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IELTS essay Is teen angst happen in your life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
336 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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