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Is technology making our lives easier

Is technology making our lives easier K0nr1

It is certainly true that technology has improved our standard of living. In my point of view, technology has positively affected in our way of living. However, kids today know more about the world because of internet but we have become over dependent on technology. Also technology and media can be a great help for old people and can communicate with their dear ones easily which make them happy. For example, Parents who are staying in India could communicate with their son who is in US by one click. On the contrary, upgraded in technology are designed to make us spend more money. The modern life press us to spend more extra on daily life such as currentbill, internet bill etc.

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 true that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
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improved
 our standard of living. In my point of view, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has positively
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 in our way of living.

However
, kids This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 know more about the world This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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but
 we have become over dependent on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
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technology
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help
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old
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people
 and can communicate with their dear ones easily
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make
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, Parents who are staying in India could communicate with their son who is in US by one click.

On the contrary
, upgraded in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
are designed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us spend more money. The modern life press us to spend more extra on daily life such as Possible spelling mistake found.current bill
currentbill
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