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Is shopping is important.why does everyone should should have a habit of it.

Is shopping is important. why does everyone should should have a habit of it. xPRgw
Generally, there are many humans who have a habit of shopping in every week or on every holiday. By the we can express that how important is a shopping could be for a particular person. Here I am going to express my thoughts towards this essay and provide my overall opinion. There are plenty of people who go to shopping for getting so free time and enjoy themselves and enjoy they lonely time with a happymood. it is a positive way. In city we can see there huge and lots of shopping malls. Where filled with a number of people and number of Shop with different kind of things like dress Shops, jwelary and so on. the place where everyone seems so happy enjoying they mood. and spending time with themselves. Whereas 95%of females can be seen in the malls. With there friends and families. it seems men are not interested in that but remaining 5% can be seen as men Shopping is an important part of every human right now. there huge number of people suffering from tension because of jobs, personal problems, students and so on so it's a positive impact which express they lonely time and have good day like every one deserves
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, there are
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many
humans who have a habit of
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shopping
in every week or on every holiday. By
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the we
can express that how
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important
is a
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shopping
could be for a particular person. Here I am going to express my thoughts towards this essay and provide my
overall
opinion.

There are
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plenty
of
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people
who go to
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shopping
for getting
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so
free
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time
and enjoy themselves and enjoy they lonely
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time
with a
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happymood
.
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it
is a
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positive
way. In
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city we
can
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see
there huge and lots of
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shopping
malls. Where filled with a number of
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people
and number of Shop with
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different
kind of things like dress Shops,
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jwelary
and
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so
on. the place where everyone seems
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so
happy enjoying
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they mood
.
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and
spending
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time
with themselves.
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95%of females can be
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seen
in the malls. With
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friends and families.
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it
seems
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men
are not interested in that
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but
remaining 5% can be
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seen
as
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men


Shopping is an
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important
part of every human right
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now
.
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there
huge number of
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people
suffering from tension
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because
of jobs, personal problems, students and
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so
on
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so
it's a
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positive
impact which express they lonely
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time
and have
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good
day like every one
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deserves
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IELTS essay Is shopping is important. why does everyone should should have a habit of it.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
205 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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