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Is online schooling as effective as in-class education

Is online schooling as effective as in-class education 0nJL9
For many years, students recieved their education only at shool. When Coronation virus appeared in 2019 we went online instead of the offline. That is why is the appearence of the virus. So we study with online few months. What do you think about what is more preferable online or in-class training. About this question every one has own opinion on it is a different. Similarly, I have views on this issue. I think study in school is much more beneficial than online streaming. Because attending a class is variety from educate at home. Everyone thinks differently. So their minds too diverse. Somebody's idea is educate at home is better than in- school. They also chose online collectible for some reasons. For instance if his house is too far from the scool or he may be ill. Parents have definetly applied for online study. Cause of such conditions. Every thing has good side and also has bad side, such as individual mode has too worse things. If a student educate online he or she will not consider fully the lesson. When they do not understand complately theme exercrises seems to difficult for them. More other types of peoples have chosen the in-class over the online. Because it is very easy understand theme. Another good thing is that they realize and everythingthey do not comprehend as soon as the lesson over. In-class teaching also has it is draw backs. Such as spending a lot of money. They spend certain amount of money everyday which means that family budget is shrinking. Above we thought a little bit about how to learn. In my opinion is as I said schooling education is good for study. Because it benefits me. It does not matter what your particular educational situation is, it does not matter if you want to study or not.
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Coronation virus appeared in 2019 we went
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why is the
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appearence
of the virus.
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few months. What do you
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about
what is more
preferable
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or in-
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class
training. About this question every one has
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different
.
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, I have views on this issue. I
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think
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study
in school is much more beneficial than
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streaming.
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attending a
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class
is variety from educate at home.

Everyone
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differently
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their minds too diverse. Somebody's
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idea
is
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at home is better than in- school. They
also
chose
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collectible for
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some
reasons.
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if his
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is too far from the
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scool or
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definetly
applied for
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. Cause of such conditions. Every thing has
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side and
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has
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side, such as individual mode has too worse things. If a student educate
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he or she will not consider
fully
the lesson. When they do not understand
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complately
theme
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exercrises
seems to difficult for them.

More other types of peoples have chosen the in-
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over the
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.
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easy understand theme. Another
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thing is that they realize and
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do not comprehend as
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as the lesson over. In-
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teaching
also
has it is draw backs. Such as spending
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money. They spend certain amount of money
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everyday
which means that family budget is shrinking.

Above we
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little bit
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IELTS essay Is online schooling as effective as in-class education

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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