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Pop is the diminutive of popular music, is a mix of several musical genres like the folk, blues, rock, country among others, it has a simple rhythm and lyrics easy to learn, its structure usually is

Pop is the diminutive of popular music, is a mix of several musical genres like the folk, blues, rock, country among others, it has a simple rhythm and lyrics easy to learn, its structure usually is: 1. Intro 2. Pre-chorus 3. Chorus 4. Bridge 5. Chorus In 1950. . . the modern pop music 1950, Leo Fender invented the electric guitar. 1954, Sony introduces the transistor radio and after that, music was accessible to people in their homes and cars.

Pop is the diminutive of popular music, is a mix of several musical genres like the folk, blues, rock, country among others, it has a simple rhythm and lyrics easy to learn, its structure usually
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3. Chorus

4. Bridge

5. Chorus

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1950, Leo Fender invented the electric guitar.

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IELTS essay Pop is the diminutive of popular music, is a mix of several musical genres like the folk, blues, rock, country among others, it has a simple rhythm and lyrics easy to learn, its structure usually is

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American English

8 paragraphs

80 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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