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Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the cause of this problem and what solutions would you suggest.

Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the cause of this problem and what solutions would you suggest. MmJQ6
Nowadays, humans affect the environment with many types of activities, and numerous people are taking the consequences. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon can result in serious problems which can be tackled using appropriate measures. It is undoubted that people affected the environment with many activities, causing air pollution, water pollution, and soil pollution. For example, the emissions from the factory and the industry make water pollution and air pollution. Air pollution may have caused many diseases and some negative effects that directly affected people. As a result, people in many parts of the world now must take the consequences. For instance, global warming and the greenhouse effect were caused by various kinds of disasters that directly affected people. In addition, soil pollution also makes it difficult for people to plant or crop so the number of people around the world is starving. In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these prospective issues. The government should give more solutions to resolve the pollution. Such as making the system manage the environment or using renewable energy resources are highly recommended which prevent air pollution. Moreover, the educator should educate children about preserving the environment and each person should be aware of protecting the environment. One clear example is throwing rubbish the right way and not putting the rubbish in the road or anywhere. Furthermore, people should plant more trees and deforestation which improves the quality of soil of the Earth. In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding the effect of pollution, yet, they can be solved once measures are enlisted imperatively.
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environment
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many
types of activities, and numerous
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people
are taking the consequences. As far as I
am concerned
, this phenomenon can result in serious problems which can
be tackled
using appropriate measures.

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is undoubted
that
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people
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affected
the
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environment
with
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many
activities, causing
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air
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pollution
, water
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pollution
, and soil
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pollution
.
For example
, the emissions from the factory and the industry
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make
water
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pollution
and
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air
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pollution
.
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Air
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pollution
may have caused
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many
diseases and
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negative
effects that
directly
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affected
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people
.
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,
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people
in
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many
parts of the world
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now
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must
take the consequences.
For instance
, global warming and the greenhouse effect
were caused
by various kinds of disasters that
directly
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affected
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people
.
In addition
, soil
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pollution
also
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makes
it difficult for
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people
to plant or crop
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so
the number of
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people
around the world is starving.

In truth,
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some
imperative measures ought to
be taken
to resolve these prospective issues. The
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government
should give more solutions to resolve the
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pollution
. Such as making the system manage the
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environment
or using renewable energy resources are
highly
recommended which
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prevent
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air
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pollution
.
Moreover
, the educator should educate children about preserving the
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environment
and each person should be aware of protecting the
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environment
. One
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clear
example is throwing rubbish the right way and not putting the rubbish in the road or anywhere.
Furthermore
,
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people
should plant more trees and deforestation which
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improves
the quality of soil of the Earth.

In conclusion
, there are
indeed
various repercussions regarding the effect of
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pollution
,
yet
, they can
be solved
once measures
are enlisted
imperatively
.
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IELTS essay Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the cause of this problem and what solutions would you suggest.

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4 paragraphs
267 words
6.5
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