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Is it important to spent money to bild new railway for fast train or safe for evolution the public transport.

Is it important to spent money to bild new railway for fast train or safe for evolution the public transport. kYqde
Nowadays in quantity of countries several people have opinion about, that is necessary to outlay large amount of money on a bilding the new railway lines for too rapid trains between cities. But other think that, the money should be exspent on reform current transport. In the firth hand keeping a brass for constructing new railway lines for fast caravans. It will be graet for busy man or woman, who must get to an other country in a short time. Also, tickeds for a train will coste cheeper than for a airplance. According to statistics a lot of people afraid of flying. That's why it can be batter for humans. In the other hand improvung existing public transport is important for citizens. Because in the old public transpotr, there are no conforts. For intance in a hot summer season conditioner in a bus don't works useful. Government firthly think about upgrading the demotic convoy. To conclude, state must admit that, improving aged convoy. It is the important to spend cash for this. After the solution of that problem, it well greate to thing about exspent money to constructe railway lines for too rapid trains.
Nowadays in quantity of countries several
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people
have opinion about,
that is
necessary to outlay large amount of money on a
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bilding
the new railway lines for too rapid trains between cities.
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But
other
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think
that, the money should be
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exspent
on reform
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current
transport. In the firth hand keeping a brass for constructing new railway lines for
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fast
caravans. It will be
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graet
for busy
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man
or woman, who
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must
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get
to
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an other
country in a short time.
Also
,
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tickeds
for a train will
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coste
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cheeper
than for
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a
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airplance
. According to statistics
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a lot of
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people
afraid of flying. That's why it can be batter for humans. In the other hand
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improvung
existing public transport is
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important
for citizens.
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Because
in the
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old
public
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transpotr
, there are no
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conforts
. For
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intance
in a hot summer season conditioner in a bus don't
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works
useful.
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Government
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firthly
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think
about upgrading the demotic convoy.
To conclude
, state
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must
admit that, improving aged convoy. It is the
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important
to spend cash for this. After the solution of that problem, it well
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greate
to
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thing
about
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exspent
money to
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constructe
railway lines for too rapid trains.

IELTS essay Is it important to spent money to bild new railway for fast train or safe for evolution the public transport.

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194 words
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