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Is it important to recycle the waste

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I can’t deny the importance of recycling the waste in the modern world, because humans have polluted the environment as much as they can. Now it is time to rake some responsible action to recycle the wastes to have a better future by eliminating the pollution. Recycling is the process, where plastics and steel wastes are molted and reshaped into a new and different material, so that, it could be reused. It is the only way through which we can reduce the pollution that created out of dumping the wastes in land and water. People can take responsibilities by voluntarily involving in the process of waste collection in their areas and they can organize a group, where likeminded people could join hands in the process of waste collection and cleaning the surroundings. Many people are lazy when it comes for recycling and opt to throw everything without separating out the material to be recycled. They should be fined and government really needs to take initiatives to encourage people to recycle the waste. Once, Maharashtra government announced that, people those who all are participating in the process of recycling they will be rewarded. The idea had worked and majority of the people were actively involved in recycling the wastes. If no measures were taken to recycle the wastes then in the future humans won’t have a place to live and clean water to drink because we have dumped 2. 12 billion tons of waste in land and 300 million metric tons of waste in water. So, it is necessary to take quick action save the next generation. On considering the effects of waste pollution let us unite together to make the environment safe and clean to live.
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recycling
the
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in the modern world,
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because
humans have polluted the environment as much as they can.
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Now
it is time to rake
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some
responsible action to recycle the
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wastes
to have a better future by eliminating the pollution.

Recycling is the
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process
, where plastics and steel
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wastes
are molted
and reshaped into a new and
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different
material,
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so
that, it could
be reused
. It is the
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only
way through which we can
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reduce
the pollution that created out of dumping the
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wastes
in land and water.

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People
can take responsibilities by
voluntarily
involving in the
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process
of
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waste
collection in their
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areas and
they can organize a group, where
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likeminded
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people
could
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join
hands in the
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of
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waste
collection and cleaning the surroundings.

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people
are lazy when it
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comes
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recycling
and opt to throw everything without separating out the material to
be recycled
. They should
be fined
and
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government
really
needs to take initiatives to encourage
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people
to recycle the
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waste
. Once, Maharashtra
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government
announced that,
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people
those who all are participating in the
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process
of
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recycling
they will
be rewarded
. The
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idea
had worked and
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majority of
the
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people
were
actively
involved in
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recycling
the wastes.

If no measures
were taken
to recycle the
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wastes
then in the future humans won’t have a place to
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live
and clean water to drink
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because
we have dumped 2. 12 billion tons of
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waste
in land and 300 million metric tons of
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waste
in water.
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So
, it is necessary to take quick action save the
next
generation.

On considering the effects of
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waste
pollution
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let
us unite together to
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make
the environment safe and clean to
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live
.
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IELTS essay Is it important to recycle the waste

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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