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Is it good to buy a car ?

Is it good to buy a car ? 251ab
There lots of strong points for someone, who wants to buy a car. However, there are dangers too. Car is used by millions of people all over the world. On the other hand, thousands of deaths are caused by car crashes yearly. To begin with, cars are very cheap nowadays. People have the opportunity to pay for a new car or a used car, whose condition is still good. Moreover, cars help people to drive in whichever place they want as quickly as possible. Many of us use them, so as to go for working and others for going trips. In addition, some individuals based their jobs on them like taxi drivers and personal drivers for some famous personalities. Some others focus on fixing cars and improve their features, in this way we conclude that cars have an important role in the country’s economy. On the other hand, there are some drawbacks, when you buy a car. Modern cars can achieve higher speed levels easily, in this way the possibility of a car crash is seriously increased. Furthermore, in some of the biggest countries’ cars are unusable due to the traffic jams in city centers and the difficulty to find a parking place. As I mentioned before thousands of people, especially in young age lost their life in car crashes, because it is easier in some places of the world, taking car driving certification, without having the demanded knowledge. Taking everything into consideration, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Buying a car will change your everyday routine significantly, helping you in your daily movements. However, there are some dangers, should be taken into account by new drivers, so as to ensure that the average of deaths by car crashes will be considered dropped.
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used
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people
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hand, thousands of deaths
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yearly.

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cars
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cheap
nowadays.
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People
have the opportunity to pay for a new
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car
or a
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used
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car
, whose condition is
still
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good
.
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,
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cars
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help
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people
to drive in whichever place they want as
quickly
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of us
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and others
for going trips.
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,
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some
individuals based their jobs on them like taxi drivers and personal drivers for
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some
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famous
personalities.
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others focus on fixing
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cars
and
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improve
their features, in this way we conclude that
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cars
have an
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important
role in the country’s economy.

On the
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other
hand, there are
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some
drawbacks, when you
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buy
a
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car
. Modern
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cars
can achieve higher speed levels
easily
, in this way the possibility of a
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car
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crash
is
seriously
increased.
Furthermore
, in
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some
of the biggest countries’
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cars
are unusable due to the traffic jams in city centers and the difficulty to find a parking place. As I mentioned
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before
thousands of
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people
,
especially
in young age lost their
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life
in
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car
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crashes
,
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because
it is easier in
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some
places of the world, taking
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car
driving certification, without having the demanded knowledge.

Taking everything into consideration, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Buying a
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car
will
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change
your everyday routine
significantly
, helping you in your daily movements.
However
, there are
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some
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dangers
, should
be taken
into account by new drivers,
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so as to
ensure that the average of deaths by
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car
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crashes
will
be considered
dropped.

IELTS essay Is it good to buy a car ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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