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International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your position.

International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. Give specific reasons and examples to support your position. oEWxK
Nowadays, People mostly interested in sports activities to become fit themselves school and parents helps children to express themselves in front of various countries by hosting Olympics and world cups. It has various demerits and merits in hosting country. Firstly, we must talk about the merits of the International sports events hostings that these countries have better investment like transport it makes there infrastructure better countries tourism factor also improves it provide better visitors and business companies. It inhances marketing of countries and also sporting facilities it influences more children towards James: But, Country must host to those guide which are financially active. secondly, there are various demerits of the provide hosting events for games that sometimes provides financial loss to the country with efficient externes which make country poor. People feel nervous about congestions in there country and the also toxes to be paid by that country. Olympics and world cups lands/stadium are we not in proper use sometimes crimes are induced in the country becauses of movement of new person in the country. Although that sometimes country management choose those games provide financial loss to the country. To sum up, International sports events are beneficial and also harmful to country in hosting Olympics and world cups. Both are stands on equal point for a hosting country.
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interested in sports activities to become fit themselves school and parents
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helps
children to express themselves in front of various
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countries
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hosting
Olympics and world cups. It has various demerits and merits in
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hosting
country.

Firstly
, we
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must
talk about the merits of the International sports
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events
hostings that these
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countries
have better investment like transport it
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makes
there infrastructure better
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countries
tourism factor
also
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improves
it
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provide
better visitors and business
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companies
. It
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inhances
marketing of
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and
also
sporting facilities it influences more children towards James:
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,
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must
host to those guide which are
financially
active.

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secondly
, there are various demerits of the
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provide
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hosting
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events
for games that
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sometimes
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provides
financial loss to the
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country
with efficient
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externes
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make
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poor.
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feel nervous about congestions in there
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country
and the
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toxes
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. Olympics and world cups lands/stadium are we not in proper
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sometimes
crimes
are induced
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becauses
of movement of new person in the
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.
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sometimes
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country
management choose those games
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provide
financial loss to the country.

To sum up, International sports
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events
are beneficial and
also
harmful to
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country
in
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hosting
Olympics and world cups. Both are stands on equal point for a
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hosting
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IELTS essay International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. Give specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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