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The illustration gives information about how rainwater provided to usage of people.

The illustration gives information about how rainwater provided to usage of people. yPNJM
The illustration gives information about how rainwater provided to usage of people. Overall, rainwater collected by dam and roof with rainwater tank to recycle and make avaliable for human usage, furthermore in this process waste water and rain water used and by various application water filtered for drinking and Daily usage. In the first step rainwater collected by roof then transfered directly to rainwater tank. Moreover, adding extra waste water used by house owners sended to the wastewater treatment plant to treat. However, excess water occured and conducted to the river. Moreover, many amount of stormwater accumulated by river. On the other hand, well treated water collected in the tank to send human usage. In addition dam which is another resource of clean water connectted to the water treatment plant, that is why water collected by dam transferred this plant by this way, after severall processes drinking water sended to the house also household used water coming from wastewater plant for general usage, but water filtered from water treatment plant used for drinking and making food.
The illustration gives information about how
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rainwater
provided to
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usage
of
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people
.

Overall
,
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rainwater
collected by dam and roof with
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rainwater
tank to recycle and
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make
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avaliable
for human
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usage
,
furthermore
in this process waste
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water
and rain
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water
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used
and by various application
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water
filtered for drinking and Daily usage.

In the
first
step
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rainwater
collected by roof then
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transfered
directly
to
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rainwater
tank.
Moreover
, adding extra waste
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water
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used
by
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house
owners
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sended
to the wastewater treatment
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plant
to treat.
However
, excess
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water
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occured
and conducted to the river.
Moreover
,
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many amount
of stormwater accumulated by river.

On the other hand
, well treated
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water
collected in the tank to
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send
human
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usage
. In
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addition
dam which is another resource of clean
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water
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connectted
to the
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water
treatment
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plant
,
that is
why
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water
collected by dam transferred this
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plant
by this way, after
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severall
processes drinking
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water sended
to the
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house
also
household
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used
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water
coming from wastewater
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plant
for general
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usage
,
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but
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water
filtered from
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water
treatment
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plant
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used
for drinking and making food.
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IELTS essay The illustration gives information about how rainwater provided to usage of people.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
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