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Is it approprite for students and teachers to be friends on Facebook? How much do you agree or disagree with this opinion and why? Giver reasons and examples to support your answer.

Is it approprite for students and teachers to be friends on Facebook? How much with this opinion and why? Giver reasons and examples to support your answer. pRKw9
All children should be given a free laptop when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree? There is an argument that a complimentary laptop should be provided to all the children as they begin high school. This essay agrees with this statement, because in a nowadays laptop computer is a necessary tool and give students more opportunities in the teaching process. Firstly, having the proper tools in the education process gives a lot of benefits. It lets save time, so the students can focus on the key tasks. The current students have access to new technologies and they can use them. Laptops make research, writing, reading, communication, collaboration, and presentations easier. For example; pupils who want to do their homework, do not have to go to the library. They can use online books or use the school website to find every material which they need. That gives them extra time to do it more accurately and correctly. Secondly, the access to a laptop is very helpful in the syllabus. That gives opportunities to do it everything easier and more efficient. The pupils can exploit a lot of software such as classrooms to contact with different pupils or teachers, they can use excel to do necessary count and presents data. This tool gives one more benefit, as well. The schoolchildren can adopt them in special situations. Instance; in pandemic time they can continue their education process, they can study without leaving home. In conclusion, provide a free laptop for every who starts high school is essential to allow every student to develop and give the same chance for everyone to access to new technology.
All children should be
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given
a free laptop when they
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start
high
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school
. Do you
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agree
or disagree?

There is an argument that a complimentary laptop

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should
be provided
to all the children as they
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begin
high
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school
. This

essay
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agrees
with this

statement,
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because
in a nowadays laptop

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computer
is a necessary tool and
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give
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students
more opportunities in the teaching process.

Firstly
, having the proper tools in the education process
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gives
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a lot of
benefits. It
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lets
save time,
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so
the
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students
can focus on the key tasks. The
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current
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students
have access to new
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technologies and
they can
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use


Did you mean "Then"?
them
. Laptops
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make
research, writing, reading, communication, collaboration, and presentations easier.
For example
; pupils who want to do their homework, do not
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have to
go to the library. They can
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use


online books or
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use


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the
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school
website to find every material which they need. That
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gives
them extra time to do it more
accurately
and
correctly
.

Secondly
, the access to a laptop

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is
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very
helpful in the syllabus. That
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gives
opportunities to do it everything easier and more efficient. The pupils can exploit
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a lot of
software
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such


as classrooms to contact with
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different
pupils or teachers, they can
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use


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excel
to do necessary count and presents data. This

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tool
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gives
one more benefit,
as well
. The schoolchildren can adopt them in special situations. Instance; in pandemic time they can continue their education process, they can study without leaving home.

In conclusion
, provide a free laptop

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for
every who
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starts
high
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school
is essential to
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allow
every
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student
to develop and
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give
the same chance for everyone to access to new technology.

IELTS essay Is it approprite for students and teachers to be friends on Facebook? How much with this opinion and why? Giver reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
17 paragraphs
275 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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