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Is it a good thing or a bad thing that a law has been imposed to control the excessive purchase of cars in British territory?

Is it a good thing or a bad thing that a law has been imposed to control the excessive purchase of cars in British territory? mWglA
Is it a good thing or a bad thing that a law has been imposed to control the excessive purchase of cars in British territory? In this essay I’m going to talk from my point of view about the excessive use of cars to the point that a law was imposed in the British area and if the existence of public transport really encourages the public to use this means to benefit. It is really interesting how technology has reached that benefit the humans, today we have the wonder of automobiles, we can go around the city with all the comforts and in a fast and effective way; but with the passage of time this is a "problem" since most of the population has access to more than one car for different needs or just for pleasure and this began to somehow damage an example of this It is the traffic that is on the streets, accidents among others. But there is also an alternative public transport which has the ability to transport several people at a time for an accessible price for all which helps a lot Is not bad that there is a law that restricts the daily use of cars but of course it should be investigated well to make a well structured dynamic to avoid problems, an Example of this could be that depending on the number of members in the family there are a number of cars as well as a place to have them and not get in the streets to avoid accidents and making a public announcement about the cars that are not even going to circulate, as well as showing them the different alternatives that there are so that they can move are problems and they are not late for their commitments.
Is it a
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thing or a
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thing that a law has
been imposed
to control the excessive
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purchase
of
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cars
in British territory?

In this essay I’m going to talk from my point of view about the excessive
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use
of
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cars
to the point that a law
was imposed
in the British area and if the existence of
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public
transport
really
encourages the
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public
to
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use
this means to benefit.

It is
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really interesting
how technology has reached that benefit the humans,
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today
we have the wonder of automobiles, we can go around the city with all the comforts and in a
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fast
and effective way;
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but
with the passage of time this is a
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problem
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"
since most of the population has access to more than one
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car
for
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different
needs or
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just
for pleasure and this began to somehow damage an example of this It is the traffic
that is
on the streets, accidents among others.

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But
there is
also
an alternative
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public
transport which has the ability to transport several
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people
at a time for an accessible price for all which
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helps
a lot

Is not
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bad
that there is a law that restricts the daily
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use
of
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cars
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but
of course
it should
be investigated
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well
to
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make
a
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well structured
dynamic to avoid problems, an Example of this could be that depending on the number of members in the family there are a number of
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cars
as
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well
as a place to have them and not
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get
in the streets to avoid accidents

and making a
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public
announcement about the
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cars
that are not even going to circulate, as
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well
as showing them the
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different
alternatives that there are
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so
that they can
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move
are
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problems and
they are not late for their commitments.
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IELTS essay Is it a good thing or a bad thing that a law has been imposed to control the excessive purchase of cars in British territory?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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