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Is hard work the key to success

Is hard work the key to success 95rgj

Thomas Edison once said, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. ” Indeed in life, the price of success is hard work. Firstly, success requires persistence as well as discipline, and both are all qualities of working hard. Successful people always try and never give up. Self-discipline also helps them not to rest on one's laurels because just stop one’s attempt, you will be left behind. furthermore, in order to get to the top, we must experience a lot of failures. When we try to overcome those difficulties, we will understand that failure also contributes to success. Lessons and experiences from failure will help us make wiser decisions in the future.

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