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is freedom of soeech necessary to live in society

is freedom of soeech necessary to live in society 66m7r

Freedom of speech is very important for a citizen to upgrade himself and society. Freedom is a key point to come forward, initiate development and bring people closer by communicating and exchanging their ideas. Freedom of speaking is necessary for anyone either he is 2 years old kid or 60 years old man. It gives people courage to communicate to make decisions and work on that. For Instance, Politicians speak in public places to make the commitments and plans to develop the country. The audiences listen to them patiently, analyse their words and gives approval in the form of votes to win, so that he can get a chance to work on his promises and commitments. Furthermore, freedom is a fragrance of beautiful society. It makes you extrovert and nourishes you to achieve defined goal. Whereas this privileged is only limited to politicians these days. Those who are not politicians and if they speak something true about someone, they can be killed or murdered, if the opponent party is stronger than them. It also limits anyone to take decisions and forces you to think 100 times before speaking in a public place. Hence we become slaves in our own country. Therefore, I truly believe that citizen should have freedom to speak in favour or against of anyone. Facing the problems and keeping quite can bring disaster and put us in soup. Instead of giving up the problems we need to become unite and work together.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightexemptionabilitypowerflexibilityprivilege
Freedom
 of speech is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for a citizen to upgrade himself and society. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightexemptionabilitypowerflexibilityprivilege
Freedom
 is a key point to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 forward, initiate development and bring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 closer by communicating and exchanging their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Freedom
 of speaking is necessary for anyone either he is 2 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 kid or 60 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. It gives This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 courage to communicate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 decisions and work on that. For Instance
, Politicians speak in public places to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the commitments and plans to develop the country. The audiences listen to them patiently
, Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 their words and gives approval in the form of votes to win, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that he can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a chance to work on his promises and commitments.

Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightexemptionabilitypowerflexibilityprivilege
freedom
 is a fragrance of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 society. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 you extrovert and nourishes you to achieve defined goal. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
 this privileged is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 limited to politicians these days. Those who are not politicians and if they speak something true about someone, they can be killed
 or murdered, if the opponent party is stronger than In formal / written English, it is recommended that you use a subject pronoun.Iheshewethey
them
. It also
 limits anyone to take decisions and forces you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 100 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 speaking in a public place. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 we become slaves in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 country.

Therefore
, I truly
 believe that citizen should have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightexemptionabilitypowerflexibilityprivilege
freedom
 to speak in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 or against of anyone. Facing the problems and keeping quite can bring disaster and put us in soup. Instead
 of giving up the problems we need to become unite and work together. 