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Government should spend more on railways than on road transport. Give your opinion

Government should spend more on railways than on road transport. Give your opinion rYaxo
Railways is the backbone of our country because of its connectivity in rural as well as in urban areas. Although, road transport is convenient way to travel from one place to another yet people prefer to travel more by railways due to low fare, less fatigue, easy food and comfortable ride. It is the duty of the higher authority to pay out more focus on railways rather than road transport. In my opinion, I agree with the above statement. To begin with the facilities individual get from railway is too pathetic. In every express train, along with general coach, air conditioner compartments are also present. Persons pay high amount to book a ticket in air conditioner carriage but they do not get facilities as per their expectations. For example, worse quality of food, unhygienic chamber and sometimes train does not come on time especially in winters. Further, major concern of the railway is train’s speed. In western countries, trains are running at speed more than 200 kmph but in our country, most of the trains are running at speed 80-100 kmph which shows administration failure in lack of resources. It is the responsibility of the management to improve the speed of the train by constructing cement concrete sleepers, along with barricading the fences so that no animal can interfere the railway track. In conclusion, I think that railway department should hear the concerns of the nation’s public and follow them strictly for the betterment of future changes.
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of its connectivity in rural
as well
as in urban areas. Although, road transport is
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way to travel from one place to another
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people
prefer to travel more by
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railways
due to low fare, less fatigue, easy food and comfortable ride. It is the duty of the higher authority to pay out more focus on
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railways
rather
than road transport. In my opinion, I
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with the facilities individual
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from
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is too pathetic. In every express
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, along with general coach, air conditioner compartments are
also
present. Persons pay high amount to book a ticket in air conditioner carriage
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they do not
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does not
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on time
especially
in winters.

Further
, major concern of the
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train’s
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speed
. In western countries,
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trains
are running at
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more than 200
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but
in our country, most of the
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are running at
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80-100
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kmph
which
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shows
administration failure in lack of resources. It is the responsibility of the management to
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improve
the
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speed
of the
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train
by constructing cement concrete sleepers, along with barricading the fences
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so
that no animal can interfere the
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railway
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, I
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department should hear the concerns of the nation’s public and follow them
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IELTS essay Government should spend more on railways than on road transport. Give your opinion

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