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Is Fashion important for you?

Is Fashion important for you? 6xRPx
Fashion is anything that becomes a rage among the masses. We see different fashion trends pouring in and taking the market by storm. Clothing is especially one such arena that sees changing fashion trends that are followed by vast number of people. People these days love to dress up well in order to look presentable in the society. To keep up with the changing times, people upgrade their style according to the latest trend in the market. Women are particularly inclined towards following the fashion and thus keep a tab on the latest trends. A few years back long kurtis were in fashion. Almost every woman, especially those living in the urban areas, was seen wearing long kurtis in different designs, patterns and style. After a few years, the trend of wearing short kurtis came in and women instantly switched to short kurtis. Anyone wearing a long kurti while the shorter ones were in trend looked rather weird. In today’s times, people have become very particular about the fashion as it gives them a sense of belonging. It makes helps them be one with the society and not look the odd one out. Fashion has thus become more than a style these days and almost has become a necessity of everyone.
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Fashion
is anything that
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becomes
a rage among the masses. We
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see
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different
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fashion
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trends
pouring in and taking the market by storm. Clothing is
especially
one such arena that
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sees
changing
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fashion
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trends
that
are followed
by vast number of
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people
.

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People
these days
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love
to dress up well in order to look presentable in the society. To
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keep
up with the changing times,
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people
upgrade their style according to the latest
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trend
in the market.

Women are
particularly
inclined towards following the
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fashion
and
thus
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keep
a tab on the latest
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trends
. A few years back long
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kurtis
were in
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fashion
. Almost every woman,
especially
those living in the urban areas, was
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seen
wearing long
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kurtis
in
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different
designs, patterns and style. After a few years, the
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trend
of wearing short
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kurtis
came in and women
instantly
switched to short
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kurtis
. Anyone wearing a long
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kurti
while the shorter ones were in
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trend
looked
rather
weird. In
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today
’s times,
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people
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very
particular about the
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fashion
as it gives them a sense of belonging. It
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makes
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helps
them be one with the society and not look the odd one out.

Fashion has
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more than a style these days and almost has
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a necessity of everyone.
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IELTS essay Is Fashion important for you?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
211 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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