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Is factory tour to see how it works and what are the department they have and also guidance like sterilization before entering the production line also guidance in the warehouse and how much product they have also how much production line they have.

Is factory tour to see how it works and what are the department they have and also guidance like sterilization before entering the production line also guidance in the warehouse and how much product they have also how much production line they have. PMQL2
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tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
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department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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production
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guidance
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product
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production
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factory
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tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
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department
they have and
also
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guidance
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
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guidance
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much
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product
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how
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production
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line
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Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
also
how
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much
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production
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line
they have.
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Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
also
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guidance
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much
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product
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line
they have.
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Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
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how
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much
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production
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line
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Is
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factory
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tour
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see
how it works and what are the
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department
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sterilization
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guidance
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Is
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factory
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tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
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guidance
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much
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product
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much
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line
they have.
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Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
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also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
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production
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line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
also
how
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much
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production
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line
they have.
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Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sterilization
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
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entering
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
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line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
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production
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line
they have.
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Is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sterilization
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entering
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
also
how
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much
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production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
they have.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Is
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factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
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see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
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guidance
like
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sterilization
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before
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entering
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
also
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guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
also
how
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much
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production
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line
they have.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sterilization
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entering
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
in the warehouse and how
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much
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product
they have
also
how
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much
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production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
they have.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tour
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
how it works and what are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
department
they have and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sterilization
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
entering
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
line
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
guidance
in the warehouse and how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
they have
also
how
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much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
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line
they have.
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IELTS essay Is factory tour to see how it works and what are the department they have and also guidance like sterilization before entering the production line also guidance in the warehouse and how much product they have also how much production line they have.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
559 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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