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THE PLACE OF TURKS IN WORLD HISTORY

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Turks are one of the oldest nations in history. They established 17 great states in the history of the world. They took an honorable place in history with their culture and civilization. Turkish history is full of golden pages. Our scientists, statesmen and thinkers have produced immortal works. The most valuable legacy of our ancestors is the belief in free living. Ataturk understood this very well. He wanted all turkish youth to learn our history. Our history is full of events that give morale to young generations in every respect. Atatürk said the following about this issue: “ Successes in Turkish history will be the source of Turkish children’s determination to progress.
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. They established 17 great states in the
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of the world. They took an honorable place in
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with their culture and civilization. Turkish
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history
is full of golden pages. Our scientists, statesmen and thinkers have produced immortal works. The most valuable legacy of our ancestors is the belief in free living. Ataturk understood this
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. Our
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is full of
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that give morale to young generations in every respect.
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will be the source of Turkish children’s determination to progress.
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IELTS essay THE PLACE OF TURKS IN WORLD HISTORY

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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