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is best way to successful by things but others suggest that advertising is a money wasted discuss both views and give your opinion

is best way to successful by things but others suggest that advertising is a money wasted discuss both views and give your opinion 5LkYn
It is often argued by majority of faults that advertising is extremely successful at made as to buy things however other and voidable suggest that advertising is so common that person do not pay longer attention to it I think advertising is convenient way for selling products of companies this essay will discuss about the both views along with my perspective to begin with the advertising is best way to introduce the good products for masses to explain some company shows their products on TV mobile phone and if the product seen by person and they also excited to buy their products products whenever they see in products on gadget in this way the Company production were increased rapidly and company or more profits to selling their products moreover a few inch visible by things online all the things by on for shopping but if a person have no time to go outside this is a beneficial for us to clarify most of advertising shows nice for people because some person busy their own works and no time to go outside for shopping so the advertising is the best solution for busy incredible for shopping online for example and Naaptol channel always present new products day by day and a large number of faults by their products online on the other hand paying money is a not beneficial for individuals whenever people order product online sometime the product is not good condition to simplify this is the 21st century all people prefers to buying things online but if the products are not good the person do not replace the product and wasted their money on fake products which is a big bag effect on individual father more sometime advertising disturb the people in their busy works to explain that whenever people busy on their business work on or on their studies work on mobile the advertising coming in their work and disturb the false in this way the individual do not concentrate their works on study or for example if the any student prepare the examination on mobile and they deeply understand the question but whenever advertising coming in his a preparation on mobile De confused about his topic in my dues I think advertising is a good way for faults to introduce the best products it is a not good only for fox but is it is also good for company profits to earn more money
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often
argued by majority of faults that advertising is
extremely
successful at made as to
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buy
things
however
other and voidable suggest that advertising is
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so
common that
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person
do not pay longer attention to
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it
I
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think
advertising is
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convenient
way for selling
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products
of
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companies
this essay will
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discuss about the
both views along with my perspective to
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begin
with the advertising
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is best
way to introduce the
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good
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products
for masses to
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explain
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some
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company
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shows
their
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products
on TV mobile phone and if the
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product
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seen
by
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person and
they
also
excited to
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buy
their
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products
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products
whenever they
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see
in
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products
on gadget in this way the
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Company
production
were increased
rapidly
and
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company
or more profits to selling their
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products
moreover
a few inch visible by things
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online
all the things by on for shopping
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but
if a
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person
have no time to go outside this is a beneficial for us to clarify
Consider using "most advertising" or "most of the advertising".
most of advertising
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shows
nice for
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people
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because
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some
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person
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busy
their
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own
works and no time to go outside for shopping
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so
the advertising is the best solution for
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busy
incredible for shopping
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online
for example
and
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Naaptol
channel always present new
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products
day by day and
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a large number of
faults by their
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products
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online
on the other hand
paying money is a not beneficial for individuals whenever
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people
order
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product
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online
sometime the
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product
is not
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good
condition to simplify this is the 21st century all
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people
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prefers
to buying things
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online
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but
if the
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products
are not
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good
the
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person
do not replace the
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product
and wasted their money on fake
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products
which is a
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big
bag effect on individual father more sometime advertising disturb the
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people
in their
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busy
works to
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explain
that whenever
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people
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busy
on their business
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work
on or on their studies
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work
on mobile the advertising coming in their
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work
and disturb the false in this way the individual do not concentrate their works on study or
for example
if the any student prepare the examination on
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
mobile and
they
deeply
understand the question
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but
whenever advertising coming in his a preparation on mobile
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De
confused about his topic in my dues I
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think
advertising is a
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good
way for faults to introduce the best
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products
it is a not
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good
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only
for fox
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but
is it is
also
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good
for
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company
profits to earn more money
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IELTS essay is best way to successful by things but others suggest that advertising is a money wasted discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
406 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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